Your love of me
like fire
sucked up all the air
left behind a pile of ash
crusted over with skin and fat
my charred boots all that remain
facing the direction I was running to
out of your life
but too late
Inspired by the prompt ‘Fire‘.
You Consumed Me
Your love of me like fire sucked up all the air left behind a pile of ash crusted over with skin and fat my charred boots all that remain facing the direction I was running to out of your life but too late Inspired by the prompt ‘Fire‘.
1–2 minutes
4 responses to “You Consumed Me”
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Wow, powerful especially the ending, too late~
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“sucked up all the air”….. powerful, especially with the image of the charred boots and the words “but too late” at the conclusion. Awesome!
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I am SO impressed, Shane. Your feelings have been wonderfully expressed!
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What a pleasure to see you on my site again. Thank you for that, and for your comments.
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