Tantalize the form to be
you brief life haunting
dainty summer seed
Inspired by the words ‘Dainty, Haunting, Tantalize‘ on Three Word Wednesday.
Fly You Fools
Tantalize the form to be you brief life haunting dainty summer seed Inspired by the words ‘Dainty, Haunting, Tantalize‘ on Three Word Wednesday.
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21 responses to “Fly You Fools”
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Shane, Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment on my blog–it gave me a good reason to visit here for a spell. And what treasures I find!
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Well it is great to see you here Nico. This Internet thing is great at connecting people, and for those of us that connect with words, all the better 🙂
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I liked it, enjoyed it..it is beautifully thought out..well done..
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Great!
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Thanks Denise. Was something I was playing around with for a few days, and just seemed to come together.
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Great take!
I’d never have considered this angle. Original. Well done.LikeLike
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Thank you Kim. I’ve been spending a great deal of time connecting (or reconnecting?) with the natural world. Noticed all those seeds flying around this week, and put it at the back of my mind. When it came time to write for 3WW, they just seemed tailor made.
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The wonder, beauty and mystery of nature well told and illustrated in your work.
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Great to see you here Mr Egg!
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lovely haiku I could picture a summer day and that happening
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Cheers Sheilagh
There were hundreds of them floating around the city this week, and when I went on my lunch hour walk, hundreds more drifting along the road. What released them trusted the open space, a strong wind, and a fertile patch of earth to call home anew.LikeLike
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Such form and completeness in so few words. Can’t do it myself, I’m envious!
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Don’t know about that mate. You just add more meat to the bone.
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Dainty, haunting and tantalizing all wrapped up in a little flying seed..Jae 🙂
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Dainty plants like the Dandelions are blown by the wind and remain short lived memories as they are carried far away!! Nice nature Haiku!!
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Cheers Nanka. Yes off they go on a journey of faith, some finding refuge here or there. Spent, they leave behind something for their other form to make a home.
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This was .. “dainty” 😉
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Somewhat dainty Lady, and haunting too 🙂
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