Little wings
beat on Spring’s tight drum
petals clap
This Haiku (3-5-3 form) inspired by the prompt ‘Memory‘ on Haiku Heights.
How I Saw It
Little wings beat on Spring’s tight drum petals clap This Haiku (3-5-3 form) inspired by the prompt ‘Memory‘ on Haiku Heights.
1–2 minutes
8 responses to “How I Saw It”
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and a close echo the drums make too 🙂
Cheers Leo. Love your work mate. – SG.
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breath taking…
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Great image in this haiku!
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just lovely- wonderful haiku.
trisha
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Thanks Trisha. This will be one of my happiest memories of last Spring. Hope to write about something as magical as this for our upcoming Winter. Eyes open!
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You have done a marvelous Haiku and such an apt image too!! Excellent!!
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Cheers Nanka, glad you enjoyed it. I found the image online, wanted to use one of mine but that was a real beauty.
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What a lovely picture your words conjure up in my mind!
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