You poppies of Spring,
remember my powdered bones
kind winds carry home
For Poets United, this weeks prompt was Forgiveness. To those men that never came back, we will remember you.
Forgive Don’t Forget
You poppies of Spring, remember my powdered bones kind winds carry home For Poets United, this weeks prompt was Forgiveness. To those men that never came back, we will remember you.
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10 responses to “Forgive Don’t Forget”
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So sad and moving! Your words supply so much emotion~
Thanks for stopping by Ellen. I played around with this one for some time, trying to find the best way to capture the moment. It is sad that so many lost everything, and now all these years later, not entirely sure why they all did it – SG
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smart words.
lovely done..
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this is touching… so few words yet so deep and profound. well done!
http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2010/12/leap-of-faith-haiku-collection.htmlThank you Ms Pink. Haiku is so lovely – SG
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Forgive the flowers. They need the nutrients.
Thoughtful haiku.LikeLike
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Yes they are just passing by, it was us that put the food there.
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“Wind, carry me home.” Very moving and powerful. Fantastic take on the prompt.
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Big thanks for the comments. I changed this after it went live, and it is now much better for it.
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Ground to Ground 
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