The chatter of youth
lay deep in wood and iron
released by young flakes

5 responses to “The Breakfast of Winter”

  1. I’m partial to haiku …. love this!

    Thanks Helen, I’m getting more partial to it myself – SG

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  2. Makes me realize how old I am! this totally captures the essence of youth Shane!

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    1. Glad to hear it Amanda. I never used a sled myself, never saw the snow until as an adult.

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  3. This is a gorgeous haiku. Thank you.

    Thank you Willow, really getting into the haiku right now – SG

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  4. Snowflakes trickling down
    Does remind us of snow play!
    New Snow

    Great to hear, and good to see you on the site – SG

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