Antidote Posted on September 29, 2010 by shanegenziuk 7 Comments Image via Wikipedia Steel shell builds winter crust flames incinerate a town I start third burger SHARE METweetPrintShare on TumblrLike this:Like Loading... Related
I love haiku…especially when in such few words a story is told and a whimsy painted.
Always looking to provide a whimsy – SG
What a verse!
I like which say so much in so little.
Cheers Gautami – SG
oh a nice twist – i liked this very much 🙂
Thanks Alice – that third burger did it for me also 🙂
A different kind of piece, looking deeper to see the light of the flames, then the antidote hit my senses and made it all clear.
Your attempt at Haiku was wonderful. Powerful piece.
Great to hear Lisa and thank you. There is something wonderful about this form, will need to keep at it – SG.
Hi Shane..I don’t know much about haiku’s but I loved yours! There was a distinct twist in the tale..very intriguing..Jae
Thank you Jae – SG