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Antidote

Steel shell builds winter crust flames incinerate a town I start third burger

shanegenziuk
1–2 minutes
Family watching television, c. 1958
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Steel shell builds winter crust
flames incinerate a town
I start third burger

7 responses to “Antidote”

  1. Lilibethl Avatar
    Lilibethl

    I love haiku…especially when in such few words a story is told and a whimsy painted.

    Always looking to provide a whimsy – SG

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  2. gautami tripathy Avatar
    gautami tripathy

    What a verse!

    I like which say so much in so little.

    fallen

    Cheers Gautami – SG

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  3. Understanding Alice Avatar
    Understanding Alice

    oh a nice twist – i liked this very much 🙂

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    1. shanegenziuk Avatar
      shanegenziuk

      Thanks Alice – that third burger did it for me also 🙂

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  4. Reflections Avatar
    Reflections

    A different kind of piece, looking deeper to see the light of the flames, then the antidote hit my senses and made it all clear.

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  5. Lisa Avatar
    Lisa

    Your attempt at Haiku was wonderful. Powerful piece.

    Great to hear Lisa and thank you. There is something wonderful about this form, will need to keep at it – SG.

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  6. Jae Rose Avatar
    Jae Rose

    Hi Shane..I don’t know much about haiku’s but I loved yours! There was a distinct twist in the tale..very intriguing..Jae

    Thank you Jae – SG

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