giant tree

We boarded the pod together

for a trip of some time

and I would watch over the others

while counting all the atoms that formed the chamber

in which my friends would slumber

Many rings later

somewhere over there

a starburst

ribbons of deep red flowed into all the space towards us

then shockwaves of blue and green

hot white pitch

bleached away everything from sight

and hurtled us like a speck of seed from the cough of a giant

through this majestic expanse

of forever

After much time my friends revived

with the younger ones each having gained thirty million rings

not yet able to control the natural cycle

and I told them of our new home

within a hundred billion tonnes of stardust

already folding in on itself

Our pods were vast

enough to carry groves of mature ringed like me

and a fortunate few would find purchase on strange new worlds

on alien earth

binding so deeply through the crust

that after much time they would launch pods of their own

We were not as fortunate

trapped within the planet core

while the younger ones each gained another eighty million rings

waiting for the pod walls to collapse

and in that moment when it did

with all the crushing rock coming towards us

I hoped something would live on this world one day

and remember us

6 responses to “The First Gilligan”

  1. Very creative, great movement. Nicely done!

    Cheers for that – great to hear – SG.

  2. Shane,
    A very enjoyable journey with your interesting words….
    Not sure if the rings collected were those of a computer game, or if an actual journey has taken place!!!

    Refreshingly different…
    Eileen 🙂

    1. Thank you Eileen, great to hear that you enjoyed it. The rings were referring to their physical growth, as in tree rings. It was also a way to indicate a time period, as in a tree gains a new ring every year. and they remember their alien ancestors.

  3. Wow, a voyage through the cosmos in the morning. I loved this flight, and the last lines are poignant.

  4. Well, this certainly took me on a star trek this morning! LOL 🙂

    1. Glad I could help out with that Jinksy!

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