Life spun silent
a sum of moments
held in the dim of stars
Inspired by the prompt ‘Big‘ on Sunday Scribblings.
How Big?
Life spun silent a sum of moments held in the dim of stars Inspired by the prompt ‘Big‘ on Sunday Scribblings.
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24 responses to “How Big?”
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Lovely use of the propmpt… things that make you go hmm. I love reading something that triggers to me to delve deeper into my mind!
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Thank you Jenifer. It is great to read that it had an impact.
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Nice one!
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Ever mysterious! Thank you.
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magical spin..smart piece.
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Well crafted words – I like the 4-5-6 format, works very well. Nice picture too!
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Cheer Altonian. I got used to writing Haiku in 5-7-5, then discovered that there are no hard and fast rules with how it is structured, providing you use a 17 syllable length as a guide. And yes, this 4-5-6 does work well for me and I’m glad to read that you enjoyed it.
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Few words to have said so much with
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The beauty of haiku Kodjo 🙂
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A sum of moments, I like that. Makes me think of life and the equation of it all.
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That is great to hear Christine thank you.
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How big? As big as the universe as wide as infinity! Well done!!
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beautiful words. I love the image too!
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Thank you Kylie, am happy with the words I was able to use on this one, and they feel calm together.
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Spun into the dark recesses of my heart and found a few things hidden there!!
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Great to hear Nanka!
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Very good, Shane, like all matter revolves… Like it!
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Cheers Denise. Yes it all revolves, from start to finish and what was between were the moments of a life. As the world turns, it takes those moments and buries them in, hiding them forever.
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Wonderful, this shifted my attention to a certain part of my brain as I read it … if that makes sense! I loved it :o)
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Great to hear Deborah, exactly what this piece was looking to do.
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Dreamy, whirly words that left me thinking.. just like that image..Jae
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Found the imagine on flickr Jae. Heaps of good collections on there, and always seem to find something to suit.
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Your word combinations are unique! Love this!
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Thanks Linda. I wrote this one out on an old gas bill, and there were at least 5 revisions to get it to this. Maybe that’s what helps to make it special?
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Ground to Ground 
Write some words and spread joy