Garden and Nature in Words

How Big?

Traveling stars

Image by ` TheDreamSky via Flickr

Life spun silent
a sum of moments
held in the dim of stars

Inspired by the prompt ‘Big‘ on Sunday Scribblings.

 

24 thoughts on “How Big?

    • Cheer Altonian. I got used to writing Haiku in 5-7-5, then discovered that there are no hard and fast rules with how it is structured, providing you use a 17 syllable length as a guide. And yes, this 4-5-6 does work well for me and I’m glad to read that you enjoyed it.

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    • Cheers Denise. Yes it all revolves, from start to finish and what was between were the moments of a life. As the world turns, it takes those moments and buries them in, hiding them forever.

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