Your love of me
like fire
sucked up all the air
left behind a pile of ash
crusted over with skin and fat
my charred boots all that remain
facing the direction I was running to
out of your life
but too late
Inspired by the prompt ‘Fire‘.
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Ground to Ground 
Wow, powerful especially the ending, too late~
Great job!
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“sucked up all the air”….. powerful, especially with the image of the charred boots and the words “but too late” at the conclusion. Awesome!
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I am SO impressed, Shane. Your feelings have been wonderfully expressed!
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What a pleasure to see you on my site again. Thank you for that, and for your comments.
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